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Post by cdoza16 on Mar 10, 2011 10:40:09 GMT -5
When a loner freshman’s blog goes viral at a small liberal arts college, he leaks private and secret information that destroys the community and endangers his own life.
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Post by mydoggeorge on Mar 13, 2011 6:40:35 GMT -5
I have to admit I'm not very good with loglines, but I think this one needs a bit more. A question that came to me when reading this is - How does he endager his own life? Who is the antagonist?
A loner freshman leaks private sensitive information on the community and endanger's his own life when his blog goes viral causing a crazed sociopath to hunt him down.
The above logline gives me the protag, the angtag and why. It's not perfect, but you see what I mean.
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Post by mscherer on Mar 13, 2011 6:52:51 GMT -5
cdoza16,
I have to agree with mydoggeorge, don’t see an antagonist here: the Who or what that stands in the protagonist’s way?
Also, why does he leak this information? And if it is suppose to be secret, why put it on his blog?
I think we all could help you out on this logline if we knew a tad bit more information: What is the secret? Why did he leak it in the first place? And who is out to get him?
Good luck and
Keep Writing!
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