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Post by Delson on Feb 2, 2011 1:24:20 GMT -5
A young film student travels back to his home country of India to interview his grand uncle, a once-powerful don of the Mumbai Mafia, and spirals into a life of crime when trying to fight the city’s corruption and police brutality.
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Post by mscherer on Feb 2, 2011 7:04:49 GMT -5
Delson,
Love to give you some of my time and help you out, but first take some of your time to register as a member
Thanks.
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Post by delson9030 on Feb 2, 2011 11:44:45 GMT -5
Mscherer,
This logline post is mine. Sorry for the confusion.
Regards,
Delson
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Post by mscherer on Feb 3, 2011 6:27:45 GMT -5
Delson, I think this logline stands on its own except for one thing: lose the last bit. A young film student travels back to his home country of India to interview his grand uncle, a once-powerful don of the Mumbai Mafia, and spirals into a life of crime.Simplify is my new mantra for 2011 Good luck and Keep Writing!
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