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Post by christietaylor on Dec 19, 2010 22:52:01 GMT -5
On the day of her husband’s funeral, a dutiful wife and mother comes face to face with an old high school crush whose return to town turns her life upside down.
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Post by mscherer on Dec 20, 2010 8:05:50 GMT -5
christietaylor,
Is this a Rom-Com? A drama? Or something for the Hallmark Chanel? Seriously, it will help in analyzing the logline.
Keep Writing!
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Post by Jeff Messerman on Dec 20, 2010 11:56:21 GMT -5
I must agree with Mike here. You have obvious conflict set up, which is good, but without knowing what genre we're dealing with, it's tough to get a grasp, visually and tonally, on what's you're after here.
Decent start though!
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