Dreaming of Me logline

[tracinell]

'Roles are comically reversed when a hunky British celebrity stalks the nameless girl in his nightly, romantic dreams to convince her they are soul mates.'

Would love your feedback...

[speakingofsegues]

Hey Traci (Or is it Nell?)

While the premise sounds interesting, and I think the logline is pretty good, the only one little thing I would change is that I would take out the word "comically". If you're giving a logline, you don't want to add in your own personal, biased critique of your own work, you know?

Reversing roles is usually enough to suggest that the outcome might be funny, plus from the logline you gather that it's probably a romantic comedy of sorts, so anything else I'd think would be better left to the reader/audience to decide.

My attempt:

"Much to her surprise, an ordinary girl discovers she suddenly has a stalker: A hunky British celebrity who is convinced her appearance in his dreams is a sign they must be together."

Hopefully we'll see a script in the Completed Drafts section some time?

Good luck!