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Aug 13, 2010 7:33:51 GMT -5
Post by freeborng on Aug 13, 2010 7:33:51 GMT -5
Here goes: The mighty Delaware Indian warrior- destined to lead his people, abandons his role to reside with peaceful Indians who are in the cross-hairs of the conquering British army and their plans to destroy them.
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Aug 13, 2010 8:05:02 GMT -5
Post by mscherer on Aug 13, 2010 8:05:02 GMT -5
Freeborng,
Welcome aboard. I hope you find your time on this board well spent.
Not sure we need to know the protagonist is a Delaware warrior. Do need to know the WHEN of the story and the WHY he joins a peaceful tribe. With that in mind....
In the mid-1700s a feared Indian warrior, sick of war, takes up residence with a neighboring, peaceful tribe only to discover that a British Colonel, Henry Bouquet, has targeted them for extermination.
Not great, but a start as you,
Keep Writing!
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Aug 13, 2010 9:20:13 GMT -5
Post by freeborng on Aug 13, 2010 9:20:13 GMT -5
Thank you.
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