You're In Luck

[irreversiblemess]

After an album is illegally downloaded and a laptop is stolen, the lives of a suicidal copy editor, a failed grunge singer, a college stoner and myriad felonious sorts become entangled during a mall robbery.

[mscherer]

irreversiblemess,

Bit too busy for a logline. Two different story lines. I think you should pick one:
1. story revolves around the stolen laptop, or
2. story revolves around mall heist.

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