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Post by lizzo1014 on May 22, 2010 19:34:29 GMT -5
A hotshot divorce lawyer gets the case of her life when she is hired by Olympian goddess Hera, who is looking to divorce her husband, Zeus and take control of Mount Olympus
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Hera and Zeus seek divorce with Mount Olympus and its other gods and goddesses having to take sides.
It's skint, I know.
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Post by mscherer on May 24, 2010 5:16:27 GMT -5
Lizzo1014,
This has the makings of a hilarious off the wall comedy. I thought of The Marx Brothers when I read your logline – don’t ask why. Hmmm, maybe Monty Python? At any rate, her is my attempt at trying to improve the logline:
A high-powered divorce lawyer, representing Olympian goddess Hera in a divorce from husband Zeus, discovers herself caught in the crossfire of a winner take all contest for control of the family business – Mount Olympus.
Please write this -- I would love to read the script.
Keep Writing!
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Post by lizzo1014 on May 24, 2010 9:55:55 GMT -5
mscherer: Once again, you've descended from the heavens to save my logline. It will be hilarious especially with the expected cameo of Kevin Sorbo as Hercules. This idea is on my list of future scripts for sure. Thanks for your help!
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Post by emhoward on May 24, 2010 14:44:32 GMT -5
I agree with mscherer if this in fact a comedy I would be very interested in reading it. And I too prefer the logline mscherer supplied.
Good luck.
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