Go Along Avy

[lizzo1014]

"25-year-old AVY ANDERSON is an unfulfilled flight attendant who is fascinated by one of her frequent passengers, the mysteriously named and stylishly stressed ENID BLOND. The fascination reaches its peak on a flight to Venice when Avy finds an expensive broach left behind in Enid's seat. Avy learns that the grass isn't always greener when a seemingly mundane task to return the broach turns into a harrowing cat and mouse chase with Avy and Enid trying to outrun and outwit Enid's vengeful lover and Italian loan sharks at the same time."

A little long for a logline, I know. That's why I posted. It's a screwball comedy in the vein of "Desperately Seeking Susan".

[mscherer]

Okay, I'll give this a shot.....

After finding an expensive broach left behind by a frequent passenger, an unfulfilled flight attendant soon discovers that the relatively mundane task of returning the broach has become a game of cat and mouse involving herself, the passenger, a vengeful lover, and an Italian loan shark.

Also a tad too long, but 91 words -vs- 46 ;D

Keep Writing!

[darrenm]

Mike's is definitely a sharper logline, and I feel it keeps in all of the crucial elements.

Sounds intriguing. Reminds me of Dumb & Dumber.