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[tous]

Short. 5 pages. Animation.
Think PIXAR- those animated shorts before the feature-length film.

Finding Love in a Clothing Store.

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I love this! It's adorable. The way I imagined it was more in line with the old-school hand-drawn animation, sort of teapot from Beauty and the Beast-esque.

I don't know if I have any criticism- I think it's pretty great. You did a great job personifying Blue and Red, and visually, I could picture everything easily. If you wanted, you could probably go through the middle and trim a bit- make sure that every little scene is better than the last we read, and if it's not, trim it, or dramatize it more/better. I suppose you can also do a little more to up the stakes- maybe Blue acquires a hole or something that threatens to take him off the floor forever and get him into the "discard" bin?

But overall, I loved it. It's charming and gave me a fuzzy smiley feeling at the end.

It sort of reminds me of one of my friend's animation projects- you should check out their production company, they do all kinds of animation, and it's really REALLY good:

www.kneeon.tv

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Wow, haha they're stories sound amazing, i wish i can find a screening. Oh and their based in brklyn. Saweeet.
Oh and thank you. I'll be sure to trim some fat off the middle. And I like your suggestion, but I'm not exactly sure it would fit. Perhaps another sided story is in order, maybe about a pair of jeans who get's a hole. Or someone's sweater nitted by their grandmother, now sits in a closet- depressed, who knows.

Yay for fuzzy smiley's - I'll be sure to share my other ones too.