|
Post by Sean Z P Harris on Aug 12, 2011 7:19:39 GMT -5
Howdy! Here is the script I wrote that won a competition recently. The competition was to take a well know Fairytale or Nursury Rhyme of old, and put a twist on it. I chose Jack and the Bean Stalk. This draft is slightly different to the one that won in that I have amended the dialogue to give it more of a Scottish twang. Let me know what you think. Cheers! Sean Attachments:
|
|
|
Post by napolyphonic on Aug 12, 2011 13:08:45 GMT -5
Hey Sean,
I think both of these scripts need to go into the "Short Film" sub-board. Just to keep things organized. I'll read them when I get a chance!
-G
|
|
|
Post by Sean Z P Harris on Aug 12, 2011 14:14:28 GMT -5
You're right, of course - not sure why I didn't.
Mike - If you get the chance, can you please move this thread and the one for The Chaser in to the shorts section.
|
|
LF
Junior Member
Posts: 86
|
Post by LF on Aug 12, 2011 21:48:09 GMT -5
Honestly, I'm not a huge fan of the short films sub board. The rate of script posting isn't that high, and shoving shorts another level deeper lowers their visibility and the likelihood for feedback. I know it's less obvious to people posting, but I'd prefer if they just put [SHORT] in the title or something instead of posting in the sub-board. My two cents Sean, I'll take a look at your script shortly. (Tho I still owe napolyphonic some feedback! )
|
|