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[flmguy]

Here is a script I finished and 2 big actors from
Spain are in talks. but one actor wants me to re-write and send it to her. Any feedback will be appreciated.

It's a love story with a radical terrorist backdrop.

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Downloaded. I don't have a lot of time lately, but I will see what I can do.

What type of feedback are you looking for? Detailed notes? Thoughts of the overall story and characters? Anything in particular?