atb
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Post by atb on Nov 21, 2010 22:07:22 GMT -5
Thanks, Marc.
Much appreciated. Maybe I should change that slug to "ON HIS EYES"... you think? Cause the shot should really only show his eyes anyway.
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marc
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Post by marc on Nov 21, 2010 23:22:35 GMT -5
That also was the image in my head when I read it. Just the eyes with the reflection of the moon. I'm really curious how you put that shot together when you shoot it. (Do you put it online?)
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Post by mscherer on Nov 24, 2010 12:52:24 GMT -5
Only four (4) entries people -- surely you all can do better than that Six (6) days and counting..... Keep Writing!
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Post by supermikhail on Nov 28, 2010 4:03:16 GMT -5
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Post by mscherer on Nov 28, 2010 7:59:03 GMT -5
supermikhail,
Could you attach your document to a post -- much easier to download. Having trouble with your existing link.
Thanks.
ps: as for a pen name, how 'bout Michael Kay?
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Post by supermikhail on Nov 28, 2010 9:03:35 GMT -5
Okay. But I'll leave the link up there, because it allows you to read online, and is supposed to allow you to download. I don't think "Michael Kay" is very unique. And my very common first name doesn't help the surname. I'd like a unique pen-name, and have already played with made-up names, but I'm not sure if a made-up name is alright. As an example for cheesy laughs, my real name nicely sums up to "Khantasm". Plus, they sound kind of flashy to me, and I'm a quiet guy, and would like to convey it with my pen-name. In short, a conundrum. Addendum. I notice that when I open the pdf on my computer, everything is bolded out and italicized. If that's the problem, I didn't do anything, that's how Celtx outputs its pdf's. Attachments:
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Post by marc on Nov 29, 2010 5:24:51 GMT -5
Well, I tried to write something. But when you need over a week to write five pages you know something is not right. But I couldn't come up with another idea. It really bugged me. I was bogged down in my story and couldn't find a satisfying solution. But then a new idea hit me from out of the blue. So I finally scratched it and wrote the new one. It didn't take long. I should hope that is a good sign. So, here it is Attachments:
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Post by marc on Nov 29, 2010 18:16:54 GMT -5
I'd like a unique pen-name, and have already played with made-up names, but I'm not sure if a made-up name is alright. As an example for cheesy laughs, my real name nicely sums up to "Khantasm". Plus, they sound kind of flashy to me, and I'm a quiet guy, and would like to convey it with my pen-name. In short, a conundrum. I always thought Mikhail Khatanzeysky is a made-up name. If this is your real name it is pretty unique, don't you think. But if you are looking for a good PEN name, why don't you call yourself Sean Pen? (and I'll call myself Sean Pun)
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Post by supermikhail on Nov 30, 2010 5:05:08 GMT -5
I'd like a unique pen-name, and have already played with made-up names, but I'm not sure if a made-up name is alright. As an example for cheesy laughs, my real name nicely sums up to "Khantasm". Plus, they sound kind of flashy to me, and I'm a quiet guy, and would like to convey it with my pen-name. In short, a conundrum. I always thought Mikhail Khatanzeysky is a made-up name. If this is your real name it is pretty unique, don't you think. Yeah, it is, but this advantage is quickly outweighed by the difficulty in pronunciation and spelling.
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Post by mscherer on Nov 30, 2010 20:44:48 GMT -5
DEADLINE.
Tonight... 11:59:59 pm EST.
Time's awastin'
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Post by dwight on Nov 30, 2010 21:11:49 GMT -5
Eastern time? come on now... ... I'll try.. this holiday weekend has been brutal for my writing.
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Post by dwight on Nov 30, 2010 23:19:38 GMT -5
Alright here is mine... The ending can be up for discussion.. It may be sort of cheating, but I was wondering how to involve some subtitles. I used SUPERIMPOSE: at first, but then read that it's best specified in the parenthetical.. Oh well. Enjoy. Attachments:
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