where did "Lens" go?

[oz]

Okay, I know I get behind sometimes but I finally read "Lens" and can't find it posted anywhere here to leave notes. Thought it was in Completed Drafts but apparently not.

?????

[mscherer]

Donna,

Did a search for LENS for the last 300 days -- found nothing. Do you remember who posted the script? Maybe that would help.

Keep Writing!

[oz]

No clue. On the script itself the first name is Andrey. Don't know if I should mention the last name because I'm starting to wonder if I got this script from somewhere else??? I'm in another, small writer's group but the name doesn't sound familiar. I'll have to do some more checking.

Could it be a member here who took it down?

I'm so confused! : )

[songswithoutwords]

Hi Donna,
I remember seeing the title on a thread here, for what it's worth. Can't find it either now.
Andrew

[openup]

Hey! You're looking for me.

I posted it. Removed it because I've been doing some changes to the script lately, and... Since the post didn't get any answers, I decided to take it down, and work on the script some more.

Um... Should I repost it, or should I just finish the corrections I've been doing, and then post it (because I intended to)? Because I would be really grateful to hear your feedback, and the changes I'm making are mainly language modifications.

And I'm really sorry for the confusion I caused. Didn't mean to. Won't happen next time...

[oz]

No problem, Andrey. I'd say keep working and repost when you're finished with your rewrite and I'll be happy to read it again.

Since you're rewriting, I'm not going to post my notes, I'll just say overall (for your rewrite) you're far too novelistic. Leave the directing, styling and acting to those people and put the story down.

Take your time and I'll watch for the repost. : )

[openup]

Thanks!

Good that you mention it, because it's mostly the novelistic that I'm trying to tune down with this rewrite. I'll post it when it's done.

Hope that when I do, I'll at least see the notes you took for this draft.

And thanks again!