Parking Lot-3 Min Short-Checkout Completed Film!

[marc]

Oh, I really love this. I think the song is well chosen, although it might give away the ending in retrospective. Anyhow, well done. Like the off focus when she puts the heart together. Also like the chord change of the song (or whatever you call it) when he leaves and she gets into the car.

A question: Don't you need the rights for the song? Is this affordable? Just wondering.

Keep up the good work.

[roadrunner650]

I didn't read the script. Just watched the video.

Thought it was a music video. Felt it was a bit boring.

Watched it again without the music.
Remove the music and only use sound f/x. I think it looks way better without the music and some eerie sound to add tension.
If you're going to use the music, I think it should come in right when he looks at the CD.

Also shouldn't she be a little sad at the end?

The title also didn't make sense to me. Maybe "The Exchange"